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An Astral Experience

S pirit leaves the body T ranscendental progression A s through a boundless universe you climb I n awe of the galaxies far from Earth’s view R ings of gasses form a time tunnel W illingly you reach for the light A waiting in the cosmos Y ou soar above heaven’s gate T his universal consciousness O nly achieved through meditation S tunned by both beauty and knowledge T ruth is revealed in this astral plane A nd a journeying soul finds comfort R ealizing this is a view to eternal life as S aint Peter offers a welcome smile *Acrostic for Susan's contest

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Date: 5/22/2012 7:33:00 PM
just beautiful Carolyn, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:50:00 PM
Carolyn congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/21/2012 9:46:00 AM
Like it a lot...congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/21/2012 8:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Susan's "Any Old Acrostic" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem winning.
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Date: 5/20/2012 5:03:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carolyn. Awesome. Nice going, my friend. Thanks for your recent comments. luv and hugs, Ralph
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Date: 2/28/2012 3:53:00 PM
Hello Carolyn and congratulations on the win in Linda-Maries contest..)
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:29:00 AM
Charming write and nice win my Caroline! Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Linda-Marie's "Stairway To The Stars" contest *Carolyn*. Love Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 8:33:00 AM
happy to read your poem this morning and delighted with its no. 1 win. Congratulations dear Carolyn. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/26/2012 8:14:00 AM
congrats on your win with this fabulous poem.. cory
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Date: 2/26/2012 6:41:00 AM
Nothing tickles me more than to see this one winning the top spot, Carolyn...it has so much meaning for me personally and professionally...I appreciate the line that the soul finds comfort and that truth is revealed..awwww...can't wait for this wondrous gift! I will be stunned and freaking out excited to meet St. Peter too..I bet he just chuckles when he listens to the songs that we conjured up about heaven...Our minds are not capable of comprehending it all! Have a blessed sabbath..a great poem... Love Gwendolen
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:48:00 AM
If i had read this without knowng the poets name, i would had said,Carolyn Devonshire! only a few here on soup, can transcend as you do, and take one on a journey of joy. congrats. harry
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Date: 2/26/2012 4:12:00 AM
Fantastic, Carolyn! Just love this! So glad to see it in first place. Hugs to you and CONGRATS :-) Cyndi
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Date: 2/26/2012 2:51:00 AM
Congratulations Carolyn enjoyed it so much xx
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Date: 2/26/2012 12:56:00 AM
This is wonderful Carolyn.Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:36:00 PM
Beautifully done, Carolyn....stunned by beauty and knowledge describes yourself perfectly! :) Congratulations!
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Date: 2/25/2012 5:21:00 PM
you really capture the awe in this piece - truly an amazing journey. congratulations on your 1st place win!
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:28:00 PM
I am so happy you won! Your heavenly trip was my favorite entry. Congrats! Rhonda
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Date: 2/25/2012 3:53:00 PM
congrats Carolyn on first place win for this outstanding poem.. thankxx for supporting luvc..
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:13:00 AM
OOOOOOOMMMMMMMMM. I want to go there where "even Eden can't compare." Brilliant work, oh spooky one. LOve, daver
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Date: 2/17/2012 2:23:00 PM
my lovely Carolyn, this is top notch work, good luck, how are you these days?...love David
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Date: 2/17/2012 4:36:00 AM
Love this acrostic poem you have penned.
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Date: 2/16/2012 7:27:00 PM
This is a wondrous journey you have described! To go off into the realms of Heaven would truly be amazing! They say some people can, when they meditate, reach the heavens! I don't know if it's true, but I'd like to believe them! This poem is fabulous, I love it! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/16/2012 5:20:00 PM
Great job and message !! Best of luck in the contest !!
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