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An Apologetic Prosy

There was a time, when I felt totally undesirable unjustifiably [I now know] and you being in your infancy felt so.. un-understood, writhing in a man’s body, seemingly a child with the heart of a warrior, a man, with all a man’s needs. There was a time, when time stood still, and time meant nothing, and age was but an unjustifiable number on a page of societal crap. I needed you. You wanted me. And so………….we were. There was a time, so long ago, it seems a passing dream; we paired, we parted, and life went on… Now, as time seems to slide by with the speed of passing film I remember, not without wonder…Who am I? And where are you? Do you remember? I am not at all sure [for who ever is…] and I am sorry, if our momentary joy, brought you anything else...In the deep of night sometimes [often, truth be told] I wonder, should I say….sorry? for loving you?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/25/2013 5:03:00 PM
a nice poem SKAT
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Date: 1/20/2013 3:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Sorry this is late. I just figured out how to see the other entries. I'm new here.
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Date: 1/19/2013 6:35:00 AM
sorry i am late with congratulations Debbie, life caught up with me lo l xx
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Date: 1/15/2013 10:18:00 PM
Love it , Debs. congrats on this win.
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Date: 1/15/2013 9:16:00 PM
congrats on a great win...
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:36:00 PM
Congrats!
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Date: 1/15/2013 11:37:00 AM
lovely write...Congratulations on your win friend Debbie. Good day always!! hugs, Maria
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Date: 1/15/2013 8:20:00 AM
Debbie~ congratulations with the wonderful win in Frank's ""DO YOU REMEMBER? " contest. have yourself a nice day~ xox~PD
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Date: 1/15/2013 7:14:00 AM
Wow, this is such an open, honest write. I especially love the ending. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:42:00 PM
DEBBIE , congratulations, with your awesome poem in MICHAEL'S contest..... xox~pd
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Date: 10/9/2012 8:29:00 PM
So sincere and touching Debbie. Congrats on this wonderful write. Hugs
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Date: 10/9/2012 7:50:00 AM
My hearty congratulations on your awesome win, Debbie! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/9/2012 5:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/9/2012 1:39:00 AM
lovely write friend Debbie...Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 10/8/2012 8:51:00 PM
Time has never stood still for me. Congratulations on your win Debbie.
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Date: 10/8/2012 7:26:00 PM
I guess this is the type of question we all have about someone or something in our past. You have written an extremely sensitive poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/8/2012 4:45:00 PM
A very deep and moving winning poem Debbie. A big congrats.
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Date: 10/8/2012 4:27:00 PM
Congrats Debbie on my only 5 winner contest with your 4 th place win. Loved it !! Great work my dear sweet friend. Luv n hugs Michael
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Date: 10/1/2012 8:20:00 AM
Hi Debbie - I am mystified and enthralled at this one. love, Kathy (soup mail)
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Date: 9/30/2012 11:35:00 PM
This is different Deb, deep and unique. I liked it alot.
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