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An Animal In Confinement

For every minute that she had count The days dimmed beyond the trees She spoke of bloomings and lily seeds For the deer beyond was not on mount The day forward was paramount Above the clouds appeared gusty The day beyond was foreseen She could not speak of her account Drinking from thy decayed spout Drowning myself in the motionless vision Escaping from this enclosure Leaving this den with precision Taking my steps on the clovers The day I saw was envisioned Just an illusion caused by overexposure

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 7/16/2016 12:46:00 AM
Kayla, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 7/11/2016 12:17:00 AM
A profound write!!!! You have a talented ink!!!
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Date: 7/10/2016 2:40:00 PM
Kayla,, Welcome to poetry soup, after reading this I TOO THINK YOU ARE AN Accomplished writer. Glad to see you enjoying it so much here. Flourishing among this community is easier than you think. Keep up the good work. *SKAT*
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