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An Angel in my eyes

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An Angel in my eyes

Is this a place of solace , a unknown jump into the abyss ?
Do I fear the unknown , it does feel like I am in this alone.

I must confront whatever may lie beneath
If it determines some loss or some sort of Grief


There has always been light in the darkness of my soul 
Only to awaken , my spirit will be whole.
All of us face the fear of the abyss, 

we all have pain in leaving  , something we shall miss.

Death is to be reborn ..Death is important as birth is to Day.
We will all metamorphosis, we all change form in some beautiful way.
If I do greet my Change with fear of Darkness

I will pray for my Angel she will guide me to eternal bliss
I believe she is here now and has never left my side , 
she is inspiring me to write now ..Putting all fears aside .

Maybe death is not so scary at all , it could represent Life , I have not truly lived at all.


This I dedicate to my Consoler Mary , she has become such a inspiration to me in  setting me free. 

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  1. Date: 8/2/2013 8:28:00 PM
    Oh Yvette, those words of yours were simply beautiful! Love this poem of yours, the rhythm, marvelous! You did very good here... Love, MC

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    Date: 8/3/2013 12:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you , now this week end , I want to write and to read all of the poems here I can , very much your poems !
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 1:09:00 PM
    You bring a great attitude to PSoup.... I like it and believe you will be well received... You show lots of talent.... Welcome..... Jake

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    Date: 8/3/2013 12:11:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Well Thank-you Jake I love it here , and I am making many friends I love already ! You are a wonderful Poet and a kind man .
  1. Date: 8/2/2013 3:08:00 AM
    - A deep and well written poem Yvette. - Live your life happy! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 8/3/2013 12:12:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank-you beautiful Anne ;) you make me happy already ~