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An Angel In Disguise

Her wings had been taken a long time ago. An angel on earth with a lovely smile. Yet they could see a sadness in her eyes, as much as she tried not to let it show. She was sent to comfort fifty old guys, they were thankful to have her for a while. Even here on earth she was fond of white, A nurses uniform fitted her well. Caring was natural for this angel girl. She made the mundane glow with heavenly light! Their gift and pleasure more precious than pearl, was stolen away during midnight bell. They had a dream to give her back wings, to help their sweet angel be heaven bound. Fifty old fellows with tears in their eyes. Two tear soaked feathers each one of them brings. Their sadness so deep I can hear their cries, all that can be heard is a sobbing sound. Old hearts lifted suddenly become young. Feathers become wings to accompany her! They see her true smile it is crystal white, with voices of praise I heard as they sung Joyful thanksgiving and "Silent Night". Taken home to heaven in a bright blur! For Isaiah's Hidden Angel Contest. I chose picture one because I imagined an angel getting her wings back.

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Date: 3/21/2015 1:40:00 PM
I love poetic stories that lift our spirits heavenward and open our eyes to love's pure light. Her inner light shone through your words, Richard. Congratulations on your winning write! Hugs, Kimberly
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Date: 3/20/2015 6:29:00 PM
Richard, congratulations on your a seven. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 3/20/2015 3:58:00 PM
Hi Richard, I love your interpretation of that visual and how you turned it around. Wonderfully written with a lovely theme. Congrats on your win! Sandra
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:36:00 PM
Beautiful indeed Richard.. congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:16:00 PM
RICHARD, CONGRATS on your win. **SKAT **
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Date: 3/20/2015 2:06:00 PM
Richard, Congratulations in Isaiah, Angel in a disguise contest...... Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2015 1:12:00 PM
Dropping back to congratulate you on your win Richard:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/15/2015 12:34:00 AM
A beautiful poem pictured a human being with angelic attributes. Awesome.
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Date: 2/13/2015 12:37:00 AM
Oh, I see you chose that first picture. I was wondering about that one since she had wings, she was not disguised, but you made the poem about what she did to GET those wings back. GREAT thinking, Richard!! I gotta get to work on this one.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2015 11:58:00 AM
Good luck Andrea, I'm sure you will come up with something spectacular.
Date: 2/11/2015 8:25:00 AM
What a beautiful poem Richard. Described the picture well. Good luck in the contest. It's a 7 from me.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2015 8:52:00 AM
Thanks for the visit and the 7 Janet.
Date: 2/9/2015 12:34:00 PM
We can be wise and inspiring at any age and I think some adults could learn from the young. I wonder if our muses are just angel voices whispering to us?... Your poem is very touching and so beautifully written. I really enjoyed it, Rick. Good luck in Isaiah's contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2015 4:55:00 PM
I like the way you express your thoughts here.
Date: 2/9/2015 9:01:00 AM
I love that she was an angel of mercy who inspired love and loyalty. I think every good step and action we take here on earth earns us feathers for our wings.
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Date: 2/10/2015 4:56:00 PM
Thanks Monterey, I just loved your Truck poem!
Date: 2/9/2015 7:47:00 AM
a great entry Richard...best wishes .. nad
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2015 4:58:00 PM
Thanks Nadiya;0)
Date: 2/8/2015 9:11:00 PM
Oh what a wonderful entry this is for the contest Richard. Truly moving and beautiful!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 9:35:00 PM
Thanks Connie. ;0)
Date: 2/8/2015 1:30:00 PM
Richard, your poem is engaging and I love the phrasing of words, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 8:42:00 PM
It was my pleasure to visit your work, you are a gifted writer.
Date: 2/8/2015 12:00:00 PM
I have an error 5oo in my reply system : ),So I have to reply here : )..I do believe every person God sends me in my life is an angel,there are those who pass on their faith to others like you. Those are then my guardian angels ,and fill our days with love gor our creator. : )
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 8:41:00 PM
What a lovely comment, thanks Charmaine.
Date: 2/8/2015 10:33:00 AM
a message of divine beauty love this write richard sang beautifully though your pen golden piece wishing you a blessed day
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Date: 2/8/2015 8:33:00 PM
Your blessing must have worked I did indeed have a blessed day.
Date: 2/8/2015 7:35:00 AM
Smooth, delightful praise of one so cherished! good work, Richard! jimbo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 8:37:00 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful visit and comment Jim.
Date: 2/8/2015 1:36:00 AM
An Angel of rare care, a touch of heaven in her stare, in our eyes she brings love light to bare...this poem makes me thankful for my Love Muse...thank you Richard. J.A.B.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 8:40:00 PM
If my poem has created a thankful heart it has been time well used. Thanks for the generous comment.
Date: 2/7/2015 9:47:00 PM
Another beautiful poem, what a pleasure to read this, this evening!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 2/7/2015 8:06:00 PM
I enjoyed that Richard, nice job full of heart. Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/8/2015 8:32:00 PM
Thanks Debbie. ;0)
Date: 2/7/2015 3:11:00 PM
Lovely, Richard...Angels are beautiful beings...messengers of heaven, and yes...some human beings are angels in disguise....and some are Guardian Poets! ;) Need to see the photo to get the full impact of this.
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Date: 2/7/2015 4:01:00 PM
I hope the poem does it justice. You are sweet. ;0)
Date: 2/7/2015 3:00:00 PM
Sorry Richard. However, I knew who I was writing to. Forgiven? I've enjoyed this poem once again. Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 4:02:00 PM
No forgiveness required, I was just amused. Hugs Rick.
Date: 2/7/2015 2:38:00 PM
Good afternoon,What a beauty this is ~Charma
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 4:05:00 PM
Look up! My message for you jumped up to Michael. It stands to reason that a message to an angel should be posted on high.
Date: 2/7/2015 2:25:00 PM
Well done Dave for the contest. Enjoyed!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/7/2015 2:30:00 PM
Hi Verlena, it is Richard.
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