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An Ambassador My First Car

An Ambassador with an antique touch was my first car and I loved it much could be started easily even with my locker key gears could be changed without using clutch. Such a car was not easy to be found each part except the horn used to make sound part by part had to sell it all parts were sold except seats I used them to make a merry-go-round! By:kash poet ============================== Placement:3rd;(March 2012) Contest:My First Car Sponsor:Carol Brown

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Date: 3/20/2012 2:33:00 PM
You might have had to "walk" a lot too with a car like this one, Kash..congrats on this slick limerick duet's success!,,,,Gwendolen
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Date: 3/14/2012 8:44:00 PM
Kash, I'd have put this one even higher. You did SO well with this poem., Congratulations on your win. Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/13/2012 2:10:00 PM
Congratulations Kash, well done xx
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Date: 3/13/2012 1:07:00 PM
congrats Kash on a grand win for this exciting entry for first car.. excellent tale..
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Date: 3/13/2012 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your win and thank you for supporting "My First Car" contest Kash. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/8/2012 11:52:00 AM
A Merry-go-Round car?...sounds like a Looney Tune to me!! You had me crackin' up on the locker key line...that is so witty! Wonderful limerick! Gwendolen
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Date: 3/8/2012 11:32:00 AM
lollll...shaking here from the details of how your car got dismantled bit by bit... toppers, kashi buddy!.:)huggs!.. wait for my next piece!
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:52:00 PM
hahahaha, you did a FUNNY one, Kash. Is this for real?? Me thinks you exaggerated this first car you had. GREAT job!!!
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:48:00 AM
ha! great story, especially the ending - very creative :)
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Date: 3/7/2012 10:39:00 AM
Bet you loved that old car, Kash. Today the Ambassador would probably be considered a gas guzzler, but I love the way you described dismantling the car and using the seats to make a merry-go-round. I bet you could take a lemon and turnit into lemondade. Excellent use of humor will guarantee you a win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/7/2012 4:58:00 AM
This one is a hoot Kash, absolutely enjoyed this :) Wilma
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