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An Affair To Remember

On the couch, legs covered, Deborah sits in delight Cary, saves the scene being so debonaire Small talk ensued, flowery now, was full of fight On the couch, legs covered, Deborah sits in delight Pretense, with lies, then excuses, then spite At the end of this scene everyone knows how they fare On the couch, legs covered, Deborah sits in delight Cary, saves the scene being so debonaire © Jul 26 For Andrea's Triolet contest Movie: An Affair To Remember

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Date: 8/2/2010 6:00:00 PM
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Date: 8/1/2010 9:07:00 AM
Well there is something to be said for "legs covered." They don't bother with those things anymore. Good luck in the contest. Love, Dave
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Date: 8/1/2010 5:34:00 AM
Wonderful Triolet Charles, it's sure to do well in the contest >> James
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:06:00 PM
Enjoyed this piece very much Charles~good luck in the contest!!!!~God bless~Rick
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Date: 7/27/2010 8:37:00 AM
You picked my all time favorite "chick flick!"!!!!!! I cry at the end of the movie, every single time I see it......get chills when he walks into her bedroom and sees the portrait he painted!!! Boo Hoo!!! ...I love this oldie!! (Have you ever seen the "Sleepless in Seattle" ? where Tom Hanks is describing this movie to his brother in law....? it is soo funny watching them make fun of this scene!!! Great choice for the triolet, Charles! Wish I'd thought of it!!!
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Date: 7/27/2010 6:37:00 AM
enjoyed reading your works today! Great write!
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:20:00 AM
Enjoyed your Triolet Charles, best wishes for the contest -- Wilma
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Date: 7/27/2010 5:10:00 AM
Great write that should be in the winners' circle..Good luck..Sara
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Date: 7/27/2010 3:24:00 AM
A nice Troilet on Deborah Scene. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 7/26/2010 11:49:00 PM
Hi Charles! Reading this makes me want to watch that movie again!!! Enjoyed this one & wish you the best in the contest! --nikko :)
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Date: 7/26/2010 10:39:00 PM
interesting,I like it
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