An Admission In Re: Vienna Bombardieri Making An Admission

AN ADMISSION TO TELL HER TO ADMIT IT (to vie in re: the poem “the sun the sea etc.) The lady doth bequeeth unto me too much praise I write of struggling through nights and she about laughter filled days two divergent lives woven together by words she said were mine and all this must be created by some grand design I wrote a banal poem that needed life and a soul and somehow she saw my poem less then amateurish and droll so she took my words and gave life to lifeless sentiments while she and I took two metaphorical sacrements we shared some wine from miles away and she wrote a line to express what I had to say interwoven words that fit together as if we were one and I was in awe from beginning until the poem was done so she wants to give me credit when she polished my shoes shoes being metaporical for a poem, whether up-beat or the blues I gave her a sow's ear and she gave me back my pride by making a pearl as I read the poem wide-eyed well I say to you all, here and now if you want to know how to make magic she'll show you how so when she tells you it was a poem I wrote alone now you know what you needed to be known © 2012..copyright PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~ p.s. “take another little piece of my heart now baby---you know you got it------ if it makes you feel GOOD!”