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An Act of Choosing

an act of choosing a choice you and I sadness with smiles tell lies probabilities in life ups and downs smile sneers eyes leers ogled glance probable options measure for measure the pits depth zenith crest base an act of choosing ____________________| PENNED ON JULY 18, 2014! for haiku on probabilities contest!

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/11/2014 9:20:00 AM

an act of choosing indeed, and this poem was well chosen in the winners list. Congrats.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/11/2014 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Scott for your compliments and supportive comments. Verlena

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/11/2014 8:09:00 AM

Great haikus Verlena ! U hv said much in few words. Really it's upto us what we want to choose, congrats on huge win!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/11/2014 9:33:00 AM

Thanks Dr. Upma for your supportive remarks... Verlena

Sam Raj

Date: 8/9/2014 11:12:00 AM

Hi Verlena, Congrats on the big win. A very nice write full of probable facts! TC:-)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/9/2014 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Sam... Verlena

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 9:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. I enjoyed reading this wonderful haiku. Excellent write! Pandita

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/9/2014 2:37:00 PM

Thanks Pandita for your congratulations! Verlena

Dr Anuradha Moogi

Date: 8/8/2014 10:13:00 PM

We'll deserved!!!!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 10:57:00 PM

Thanks Dr. Moogi for your high marks. A compliment I have enjoyed... Verlena

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 9:47:00 PM

well penned and crafted piece, Verlena. congrats

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 10:09:00 PM

thanks Dr. Mehta for the congrats... Verlena

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/8/2014 8:59:00 PM

Grats on your win Verlena Well done :) :)

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 10:10:00 PM

Thanks Casarah for the congrats! I see that you took first place. Nice to be amongst winners for a change... Verlena

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/8/2014 8:24:00 PM

Returning to see your fine win my friend! Big congrats!!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 8:36:00 PM

Thanks Robert. Verlena

D.W. Rodgers

Date: 8/8/2014 7:37:00 PM

Well penned, congrats on your win

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 7:45:00 PM

Thanks Dave... Verlena

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 8/8/2014 7:33:00 PM

Well done, Congrats!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 7:45:00 PM

Thanks Rick... Verlena

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 6:55:00 PM

Big congrats on a big win, Verlena!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 7:08:00 PM

Thanks Andrea on your congrats... Verlena

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2014 6:25:00 PM

congratulations on your fine win Verlena:-) Hugs jan xx

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 6:36:00 PM

Thanks for your congratulations Jan. I have enjoyed doing this poem... Verlena

Paul Callus

Date: 8/8/2014 2:23:00 PM

Excellent haiku, Verlana. The choice is probably in our hands. Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Paul. Individuals do and many times must make their own choices. Verlena

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 7/25/2014 12:54:00 PM

WOW! Haiku Magic. Also, Zenith is in my top 5 favorite words. I posted a poem on here called Zenith...something or other a couple years ago. It's an A-Z, letter usage poem. I think it's called Abercrombie style. Don't quote me on that. It's Ab something. Did I mention names are not a strong suit for me along with reading? expanding on earlier, if my wife didnt type my comments no one on this site would read any of my poems. Also, I wouldn't be able to hear such nice words penned by you all.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 8/8/2014 3:20:00 PM

Thanks JS for your heartfelt remarks... Verlena

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/25/2014 1:43:00 PM

Thanks JS for reading my poetry... You roc! Verlena

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/21/2014 9:37:00 AM

Great writes my friend!! I sent you a pm here. Best of luck in the contest!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 7/21/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Robert... Hugs Verlena