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An Accolade To a Love

On the first day HE must have begun for such beauty couldn't be created on a short span Eyes designed in a heavenly fashion Lips ruby enough to appease any man Hypnotize, mesmerize- to anyone she can Divine enough to be called earth's Venus No bitterness, No sadness, No act of heinous Smile on that face turns my night into day Content with youth itself forever All the problems, worries now seem far at bay She finds the best in me, my perfect lover When she cries, the heavens turn gloom When she laughs, Oh! how the flowers bloom But Alas! though such heavenly beauty HE could've made Guess he wants her for himself; as for me such divinity neither lives nor is dead!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/15/2015 5:20:00 AM
Great Love accolade Bikal! :)
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Date: 10/22/2015 3:37:00 AM
- Hello Bikal :) - Autumn is a great time to write and read poems :) - I welcome you to the P - Soup, with your great first poem :) - Hope you will have a nice time here with us - Best wishes and good luck - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bikal Nepal
Date: 10/24/2015 1:43:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anne! I'm already having a great time. :)
Date: 10/18/2015 4:32:00 PM
Bikal, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Bikal Nepal
Date: 10/19/2015 6:56:00 AM
Hi SKAT! Thank you so much. I'd love to be your friend too. I'm a student of Computer Engineering and love writing and reading poems in my free time. :)
Date: 10/17/2015 5:11:00 PM
Bikal, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Bikal Nepal
Date: 10/17/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thanks a lot Linda! :)

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