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as you go back in there and makeing the point heard what you come to say is . As I stand here thinking there's no more screaming, but most of all no more blood spilling of our loved ones. But same time congratulating the surviving, and tears begin falling for the fallen. But as the living walk out of the war, getting back home, they get honoring and huge respects for defending their country. As some go using as a excuse. for there action filling their blues. But as we grieve over fallen loved one's, we embrace the flag's image and meaning, which comes to be as becoming a solider and defending the country, the land of the free, and home of the brave. We shall conquer if we must, when our cause is just. but as others rely on no kind of trust, only power and making the country full of cowards. As living with no trust or ruling, it puts a wrong impression of those who have fallen, bringing out a view that their death meant nothing. But as they fall or crawl, their name is respected, glamoured, unlimited praise. Every time the flag is raised, shall be given and praised when brought to saying. All the flags will forever stay flying, symbolizing this is land of the free, home of the brave, ready to unite and fight at any time, making the pain flee from our country. So we need to give our military praise and comfort as they survived the darkest times. As we give plenty of our thanking and gratitude that they're back home to hold you. But as time passes they're a relaxen. They start to feel the effect on surviving, their life to defend our country and still surviveing to tell there tell. as they hit the airport floors the crowd begins to roar in excitement and relieaf in there liveing return. but we will not ever for get to give thx for to whom that have fallen not just that but give are praises and thanks also comfurt the familes of those sacraficeing ther loved to keep freedom for all. just be thinking the harder they fall the more the state rises not saying all falls stay at a crawl but back to main fact as the sad lost gets over passed not respeted for his or her doing or should i say servings but those whove fallen and stayed to the ground may be gone to others! but will all ways b in r souls power to with stand and over come the sorrow pain the missiory

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Date: 9/2/2015 11:20:00 PM
Congrats Edward for a big win with this very beautiful write!
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Date: 9/2/2015 3:40:00 PM
a powerful write congrats on your win Edward :-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2015 2:50:00 PM
Edward, Congratulations on your win. I'm overwhelmed on the outcome of my collaborations, I also gave a fair mention to those who did not follow the rules. Stop by my latest blog "MY FELLINGS" or my newest poem "FLESH" if you'd like or have time. Enjoy some of the collaborations on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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