Amusements

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Iris E. S-Lewis.

Lunes done several years past.

LUNES The morning fades Sun sits on center stage Smiling non stop. To gain momentum my pen and I paused before white sheets. I don't care That you dare to stare Let smile appear. Can someone kindly Recommend me a catching read I can gobble? A spider dangles Like trapeze artist on rope In mid air. Lunes at noon While awaiting lunch in saloon Overlooking vast lake. The husband's jealousy Without shame towards two kittens Happy and gay. *

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2015 11:40:00 PM

this was very fun to read. The last one is funny. could almost be about MY hubbie!!!

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/2/2015 2:16:00 PM

Aah, Andrea, simplicity of lunes like haiku I enjoy. Thank you for sharing your time to view and comment.

Tonytocaa Camacho

Date: 2/26/2015 8:13:00 PM

Hey iris,love this style kind of makes you smile..enjoyed ..Tonytocaa

Iris E. S-Lewis
Date: 3/2/2015 2:17:00 PM

Tony, I do thank you for sharing your time; viewing and commenting. I like brevity of lunes and haiku. I see you do too.