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Amputation

The door shuts lightly behind me soft click metallic boundaries I turn around to see, that you are the one that closed it. And I swallow a storm.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 12:43:00 PM
Wow...this was powerfully said in your brief poem! Well done. Congratulations on this poem being featured this week. ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/29/2008 10:19:00 PM
Julia - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 11/24/2008 6:51:00 PM
Congratulations julia on your featured write "Amputation." Vince
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Date: 11/24/2008 9:59:00 AM
Wow. Heavy duty excellent write. Congrats on a great featured poem. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/24/2008 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/23/2008 11:40:00 PM
Great write, Julia. So much said in so few words. congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Well deserved. Love, Nigel
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Date: 11/23/2008 10:05:00 PM
I understand this is a very emotional poem. Great visual. I hope the storm is over. Congratulations on being featured. My blessings with you! Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/23/2008 6:54:00 PM
This is a powerful poem. The short lines and imagery work well. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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