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Steamy sultry summer night stirring thick air Sweet honeysuckle scent spreads everywhere It is moonlit night and I sit on the shore alone Think about many a loves that have come and gone. But only one image returns on this cool night Amorous *Amee came to me as virgin fresh that night I laid my head on her heaving breasts. On her curvaceous waist were my hands. Surely not to be missed, her lips were near Night thro’ we made love without fear. Between the dusk of September 30 night We caught at a mood as it passed in flight. And what with the dawn of night began With the dusk of day was done; For that is the way of woman and man, When a hazard has made them one. Till the early dawn of October first day, We succeeded to bade it stoop and stay. Goodbye sweat, sting and wavy air Goodbye hot love and steamy night fair.. ============================================================ This is a revised version of my poem Nectar on the soup. Amee, in Indian languages, means Nectar. ============================================================ Fourth Placement Contest: Steamy Summer Love

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Date: 7/21/2010 9:21:00 PM
Nice imagery here...congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:15:00 AM
Congratulations Dr. Ram on your well deserved win in Linda Marie's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 9:23:00 PM
What ever happened to Amorous Amee Doc? Did you marry her, or did she get away? If it's the latter do ya still got her number?:) Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:35:00 PM
Way to go in the contest, Dr. Ram. Where have you been?? I don't see you much these days. Good entry, good sir! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/18/2010 7:23:00 AM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my contest about Steamy Summer Love.. this one was beautiful.. thankxxxfor supporting my contest.. my new contest will be posted today.. with luv..
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Date: 7/15/2010 7:30:00 PM
A romantic poem with lots of passion. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 7/15/2010 1:02:00 PM
Lovely indeed! I hope you have entered this in the contest. I see you read part one of 'The Devil's Tide'.(A Ballad writen in the meter and syallable count of Edgar Allen Poe's, 'The Raven'). It was too long to post in one part, so there is a part two also posted. Lainie
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Date: 7/15/2010 6:36:00 AM
Thank God for memories, huh Doc? I have many that I keep handy, now that I'm single, to sustain me through what's to come. I enjoyed your write and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/14/2010 9:35:00 PM
Hello Gerard. You call me old rogue. I am definitely old and not a rogue and don't use rogue's language anywhere. What makes you say that this is a harlequin romance?
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Date: 7/14/2010 3:28:00 PM
Why, Dr, Ram, you old roogue. I always suspect that behind every man of the Bard, there is a true man of intense passion and romance. This is a Harlequin romance in one page. Nice compression, Dr! Regards and admiration from Gerard
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Date: 7/14/2010 8:32:00 AM
What an amazing and visual write! Great job~ Molly
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:25:00 PM
lots of passion her, enjoyed,..p.d
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:53:00 PM
Very passionate, Dr. Ram. "Steamy and sultry" indeed! And you even remember the date of this romantic encounter with Amee! Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:45:00 AM
Very steamy and sultry memories of amorous Amee. Best of luck in the contest. Thanks for your kind comments ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:12:00 AM
very nice one for the steamy summer contest, certainly fits the bill, good luck and thank you for your always kind words. Francine
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:17:00 AM
Oo La La! very passionate. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:32:00 AM
Passionate write..Sara
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:17:00 AM
Another fine poem from you, Dr. Ram...wonderful alliteration...those magical moments stay with us forever, don't they?... As if they happened only yesterday - Tim
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