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Amore Mio

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Amore Mio

I am sitting in my Dorchester lair,     
And behind the door I do feel your mien,  
When my poetic muse is in the air,    
You look real as life to me, “Amore Mio”.   

When I am surfing on the internet,
You are there in my click I envisage,
 I initiate to scribe a sonnet,
And lo! I see you embossed on the page.    

Sighing, wry face, the lips as a dried leaf,     
Your greenish deep eyes upraised fully,
Neither death kills me, nor does lonely life,       
But your silence eats my soul and body.         

Numb as a disease, I die of a thought,
My love, don’t you sense the same as I aught?

A Shakespearian sonnet in Iambic Pentameter (ABAB CDCD EFEF GG)

Contest: Loneliness            7Th place win

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  1. Date: 9/26/2013 3:56:00 PM
    nice win...........SKAT

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:33:00 PM
    congratulations.... Linda

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 6:23:00 AM
    Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 7:00:00 PM
    i should be calling you Dr. poet from now on. . . . Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 5:46:00 PM
    beautifully penned sonnet...congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 3:17:00 PM
    excellent poem Dr Ram a worthy win congrats Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 2:25:00 PM
    A nice job with your sonnet, Dr. Ram! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:42:00 AM
    You spoke in a most eloquent way, the spirit of the lonely heart! Well done, Dr. Ram!!

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 9:41:00 AM
    congrats on your win Dr. Mehta

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on a fine win.

  1. Date: 9/17/2013 6:35:00 AM
    Elegant emotion and haunting. One that makes me want to read more than once. Beautifully expressed :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 8:28:00 PM
    I love your poem. It's beautiful. I once wrote a poem in Spanish called - Amor Mio - Donde Estas? I have it here in English ( Where Are You ? ) Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla

    Mehta Avatar Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 9/17/2013 8:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for lovely comments. At present I am in India
  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:20:00 PM
    "Neither death kills me, nor does lonely life, But your silence eats my soul and body"- brilliant verses. Cool read; enjoyed it very much! Kudos! :)

  1. Date: 9/15/2013 12:53:00 AM
    never will lose the touch ,a master of your own time dr dam ,duncan

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 11:27:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:09:00 PM
    excellently penned.. I enjoyed the read! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 12:55:00 PM
    Beautiful poem Dr. Ram! Silence really does wreck havoc on the senses. Well penned - you've pulled off the form fantastically.

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 10:57:00 AM
    Very nice Dr. Ram, thank you for stopping by. I almost forgot to enter the contest! :o)

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 9:20:00 AM
    I do enjoy this type of sonnet..Very passionate work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 5:53:00 AM
    You did this one justice Dr. Ram, u didn't use a mallet but a carving knife, you you're sculptured words fit nicely into the scheme of things, love xxx