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Amore Mio

I am sitting in my Dorchester lair, And behind the door I do feel your mien, When my poetic muse is in the air, You look real as life to me, “Amore Mio”. When I am surfing on the internet, You are there in my click I envisage, I initiate to scribe a sonnet, And lo! I see you embossed on the page. Sighing, wry face, the lips as a dried leaf, Your greenish deep eyes upraised fully, Neither death kills me, nor does lonely life, But your silence eats my soul and body. Numb as a disease, I die of a thought, My love, don’t you sense the same as I aught? ========================= A Shakespearian sonnet in Iambic Pentameter (ABAB CDCD EFEF GG) Contest: Loneliness 7Th place win

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Date: 9/26/2013 3:56:00 PM
nice win...........SKAT
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Date: 9/22/2013 7:33:00 PM
congratulations.... Linda
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Date: 9/19/2013 6:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2013 7:00:00 PM
i should be calling you Dr. poet from now on. . . . Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/17/2013 5:46:00 PM
beautifully penned sonnet...congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/17/2013 3:17:00 PM
excellent poem Dr Ram a worthy win congrats Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/17/2013 2:25:00 PM
A nice job with your sonnet, Dr. Ram! Congratulations.
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:42:00 AM
You spoke in a most eloquent way, the spirit of the lonely heart! Well done, Dr. Ram!!
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Date: 9/17/2013 9:41:00 AM
congrats on your win Dr. Mehta
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Date: 9/17/2013 7:56:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win.
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Date: 9/17/2013 6:35:00 AM
Elegant emotion and haunting. One that makes me want to read more than once. Beautifully expressed :)
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Date: 9/15/2013 8:28:00 PM
I love your poem. It's beautiful. I once wrote a poem in Spanish called - Amor Mio - Donde Estas? I have it here in English ( Where Are You ? ) Thanks for sharing...... Lucilla
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 9/17/2013 8:41:00 AM
Thanks for lovely comments. At present I am in India
Date: 9/15/2013 12:20:00 PM
"Neither death kills me, nor does lonely life, But your silence eats my soul and body"- brilliant verses. Cool read; enjoyed it very much! Kudos! :)
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:53:00 AM
never will lose the touch ,a master of your own time dr dam ,duncan
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Date: 9/13/2013 11:27:00 AM
EXTREMELY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITTING
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Date: 9/12/2013 1:09:00 PM
excellently penned.. I enjoyed the read! Cindy
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Date: 9/12/2013 12:55:00 PM
Beautiful poem Dr. Ram! Silence really does wreck havoc on the senses. Well penned - you've pulled off the form fantastically.
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Date: 9/12/2013 10:57:00 AM
Very nice Dr. Ram, thank you for stopping by. I almost forgot to enter the contest! :o)
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Date: 9/12/2013 9:20:00 AM
I do enjoy this type of sonnet..Very passionate work..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/12/2013 4:57:00 AM
How I wish to know how to write a beautiful somnet such as this.So so very romantic..sentimental..melanchonic and enchanting..Going to my favs
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Date: 9/12/2013 4:24:00 AM
- Touching and beautiful, Dr. Ram! - Good luck in the contest .... hope your poem will win! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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