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Amor Fati

~Amor Fati~ Justin Richter - It is no wonder, looking up at the cosmos, That they worshipped the Gods - The diviners of Reason And the theologians of old. But how devout were they? Even then, in their temples of devotion, Searching for answers Where truth be told. And what would their pantheon say? As we now ascend to the heavens, To our neighbors in Their name. "There are mortals at Olympus!" "We are betrayed!" "How dare they fumble forth, Naive in Our domain?" Yet where is the scepter of Jupiter? Or the lightning bolt of Zeus? Where are the seers and the soothsayers? The Oracle, the prophecy unfulfilled? They died with Delphi, And took the Olympians. Will that be our fortune? In far away places, Will they look to us as deities, Those believers yet to believe? Is that what lies behind our stars - Are we our gods we worship? Are we as fleeting? As fragile? After all, what God prays our prayers? To what end is our tithe? Like the dead, Our thoughts see Them alive. That cannot be! The Alphas and the Omegas, Entwined with human affairs!? Hah! Listen, young God, If those Old Ones subsist, They leave us to our fate. And so it comes to pass; You, The beginning, And eventually... The end - Amor fati. -

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Date: 3/21/2018 12:21:00 PM
Great poem Justin. I hope you plan on posting more.
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Date: 3/14/2016 1:08:00 PM
- Thank you for your first poem, Justin :) - I welcome you to Poetry Soup :) - Hope you will find our "soup" friendly and fun - Good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/14/2016 11:36:00 AM
Hi Justin, Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:23:00 AM
Very interesting piece, congratulations on you
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Justin Richter
Date: 3/13/2016 1:35:00 PM
Wow, didn't think I would get anything, thank you very much!
Date: 3/13/2016 10:36:00 AM
Justin, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/12/2016 9:50:00 PM
Justin, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/9/2016 1:00:00 PM
Justin, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Justin Richter
Date: 3/9/2016 1:14:00 PM
Thanks Linda, I would love to have feedback. This is the first poem I have worked on. I definitely want to learn and develop a craft. Is there a poem of yours that you would recommend? I can tell you more about this poem if you are interested.

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