Among Crocus

among crocus stands a lone daisy I am humbled

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2014 11:27:00 PM

I just noticed I had remarked on this one back in August. probably I am caught up with your haiku now. Have a good night.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2014 11:26:00 PM

now see, here you are giving an opinion in a haiku, and I think it sound absolutely fine to do that regardless of what some in the haiku world say about that.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 9:36:00 AM

Very creative write with apt images, Charles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/25/2014 8:10:00 AM

I love this. And I can see you have written many haiku since I last checked. If I were not rushing off to work I would read more. Hope I can remember them and come back to see them all!!