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Among Ancient Oaks

How quickly they scurry each November among ancient oaks. Jaws holding the treasures they hoard in domestic holes. Flicking bushy tails while finding acorns and cones in woodland delis. November 7, 2022 A November Nonet Contest Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2022 4:15:00 PM

Beautiful nonet, jenna, and I agree with Tania down here. The word for this one is charming!

Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/9/2022 6:38:00 PM

Jenna, a charming poem, squirrels are so entertaining, best of luck in the contest!

Charles Messina

Date: 11/8/2022 6:58:00 AM

Seems everyone loves to watch squirrels; they are a joy to watch...until they get in your attic (lol) Lovely entry for the contest, Jenna. Best wishes...Charlie

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/8/2022 8:47:00 AM

They're quite entertaining. Thanks, Charlie.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/7/2022 6:09:00 PM

I like this, Jenna!

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/8/2022 8:47:00 AM

I'm so please you do. Thanks, Kim!

Terry Flood

Date: 11/7/2022 10:54:00 AM

Can’t go wrong with those squirrels, Jenna. My own entry, which I’m not quite happy with yet, looks scruffy and jagged. Yours like it’s been filed smooth. I wonder if you worked at that or was it pure chance. Either way, it looks as good as it reads. All the best in the contest. Terry

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/8/2022 8:46:00 AM

I write what comes to mind, let ir sit for a while and then return to say..."What was I thinking?" It's all about the editing, Terry. Thanks for your interest and remarks.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/7/2022 10:01:00 AM

Certain to win on composition! Aloha!

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/8/2022 8:45:00 AM

Thanks a lot, Rico.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/7/2022 8:31:00 AM

Aw, this is just delightful, Jenna. Reminds me of the squirrels that scurry about in my backyard. Superb writing.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 11/7/2022 11:08:00 AM

Not really. I have a single dogwood in the front yard, and I have two sycamores in the backyard. They are huge, old trees that are probably the tallest in our neighborhood. The squirrels seem to love them.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/7/2022 9:21:00 AM

Hi Milt. Thanks for the insight. You must have lots of trees in your yard.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/7/2022 8:20:00 AM

They're a delight to see this time of year as they get ready for winter. Love the layout Jenna. Hope your week is off to a good start. Tom

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/7/2022 9:20:00 AM

They certainly are busy little critters, Tom. Thanks and so far the day is good. I'm awake and motivating! ;)

David Bose

Date: 11/7/2022 7:37:00 AM

I think the words scurry, too ... what a pleasant, quick rhythm, and "woodland delis" made me smile.

Jenna Logan
Date: 11/7/2022 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, David. I appreciate that you pointed out what you liked most.