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Amidst Fields of Dry

Through my eyes I see a home of old If it could speak what would I be told Would it be stories of joy or sadness and hurt Will I ever be told before it's crumbled to dirt Below a saddened sky amidst fields of dry Could this be reason as I wonder why Barren lands as the eye can see Is this the answer that's in front of me A dilapidated fence with wire of old No more are the beasts that were in safety hold Hedgerows so brittle in decaying cascade Here nature has spoken with her typical tirade Through my eyes I see a home of old If it could speak what would I be told Death is never lasting as I look to my right For a greened tree prospers, it gives me light http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-17.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/8/2011 9:17:00 AM
"Hope springs eternal" as they say. A fine, wistful write. Poetically descriptive and vivid. Excellent! Robert.
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Date: 9/7/2011 8:29:00 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to share your thoughts. Keep on writing my friend. Karen
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Date: 9/5/2011 9:36:00 AM
well written poem!! enjoyed reading today!!
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Date: 9/4/2011 9:37:00 PM
James, this is very nice. Nostalgic, kind of sad and finishing with some hope. WEll done.
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