America

Amazing lands that welcome dreams Manufacturer's of many themes Ever ending in thought, to people free Richness in comfort, to her people pray she Invited us, to live on her lands Comforted All of US

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/7/2009 5:57:00 AM

It was the vision of the Pilgrims drawn here by liberty's flame ... O that we all could keep her vision pure. Great write.

Date: 5/4/2009 2:18:00 PM

What a patriotic reflection. Nice use of the acrostic form. Clever last line. Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Keep on writing. Karen

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/3/2009 10:55:00 AM

James, I'm smiling...more great work. I love America, too. Keep writing my friend. Love, Dane

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/3/2009 10:43:00 AM

nice thought! Light & Love

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 10:36:00 AM

Great acrostic James, I agree with the context...Raul