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Pardon my long poem and alliterations lol written for tom woodys contest, on alliterations and love! 
 

O beloved chevalier, cloaked in shimmering champagne armor, tonight I long to feel your sultry skin, embroidered with emerald embellishments and twinkling teal topaz, tailored to tempt, veiling these tanned desires. My soul sways to a chained string of softened serenades, where the definitions of this drawn devotion dance amidst dusted darkness. I still remember how you willfully whispered wildflower wishes to my wounded senses, enlightening me with the tainted truth, thawing thick polar ice walls shielding my pale presence. I remain the scintillating silhouette of twin stars you’ve sketched in sunflower silence, across sepia skies above sleepless seas, ferrying sapphire soliloquies. The power of penciled prose reignited flickering fireworks, cosmically reuniting the cashmere chorus of this lilac love. We walked hand in hand, with piercingly pristine poetry, filling the impeccable emptiness, emanating from unspoken poems through the tingling tips of our titillating fingers. I ponder, if the magnolia moon followed the fragrant footprints of our flaming frequency, would Cupid resting on crooning constellations then call this an endless endearment, entwined in an inescapable entanglement? Abandoning glimmering gold to glide into a galactic sphere of garnet glory, tracing our heartbeats’ ricochet to the same radiant rhythm, oblivious to the malicious monologues shadowing us like the cranberry crescent and the tamarind twilight. Now our spirits synchronize a halcyon hymn in hibiscus harmony, forsaking the heinous horizon drenched in hidden hatred, and I have no desire to tame thorns and thistles that may throttle our need to thrive. Some might say blindness has taken its place. Yet, I care not for the somber sight, when senses within can feel the selfless grains of your veracious verses, vibrating the symphony of your soulful sonnets through your saccharine smile. Tonight I seek the amorous amethysts adorning alluring alliterations upon my lyrical lips, sprinkling me with daisy dunes as the deserts rise to great heights, lost in this musical moment, as time sprouts fuchsia fields, even through sullen seasons, when fate finally finds the roseate reason to flourish our pearlescent path. The universe had its ears on the nocturnal nights I’ve spent without you, pleading to the bleak, bruised clouds, awaiting kaleidoscopic kismet to glaze diamond dews upon our destiny. Reality has convinced me that dreams no longer shine brighter, as wrinkled winter now feels like summer, when waltzing next to the hyacinth heart of my bleeding ink. Chaos became a motionless momentum, merely magnified within magical melodies, moving mystical mountains, merged in melodramatic metaphors, bringing your aesthetic aura in ambient tides to rebirth a begonia beginning that has no ending. So, would you be my saintly sinner, as our spirits collide, eternally interlaced in the ethereal infinity of the cosmos? You are the winner of the glistening rays that I’ve seized from the elysian meadows, of your poetic petals... Yours, forever, an etched ambrosial Aphrodite, weaving wonders across the crystalline canvas for a trillion springs more.

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Date: 5/25/2024 10:36:00 AM
Ah I miss reading your majestic metaphors... bt I am glad I got to read this one, such an emotive imagery and your alliterations are as gorgeous as your soul is... congratulations for your placement in the contest dear! This piece sure deserved to win!
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Date: 5/25/2024 8:48:00 AM
"oblivious to the malicious monologues shadowing us like the cranberry crescent and the tamarind twilight." Esthetic. How did I miss this? I always love your love poems. "So, would you be my saintly sinner, as our spirits collide." That hits hard. Congratulations dear Ink.
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Date: 5/25/2024 6:20:00 AM
Congrats on placement Inky! My fave stanza easily was the penultimate one. Awesome poetry, but we expect that from you
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Date: 5/25/2024 7:46:00 AM
Awwwn thats so kind of you to say haha. I didn’t expect a placement tomsz. This poem is way too long. And too poetically different to your taste . I was just supporting you .. thank you so much for your generosity
Date: 5/23/2024 9:56:00 AM
IE, you have a very sensual and mildly erotic way of putting these things...OMG. I am particularly intrigued by, "my soul sways to a chained string." This could mean several things. It could be your brain internal tendencies, the connection to a lover, or some connection to the universe. A lot to ponder. You describe these feelings with such tenderness. Amazing!!
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Date: 5/21/2024 9:13:00 PM
Whoah, gorgeous writing..especially the ending was so complete, powerful...you never cease to amaze or touch my heart! :) <3
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Date: 5/21/2024 4:16:00 AM
"Whispers of wildflower wishes as you seize glistening rays from elysian meadows", Beautiful write
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Date: 5/20/2024 11:58:00 AM
Your alliteration mystifies me, plus your great imagery, metaphors and emotions. A great poem.
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Date: 5/20/2024 5:22:00 AM
Such an amazing arrangement of alliterations here.. Blows my mind... Your poem is a romantic masterpiece moulded like Michelangelo.. It is long, but tender and alluring.. It is rich in metaphors, comparing emotions and experiences to natural and celestial phenomena. For instance, "soul sways to a chained string of softened serenades" and "cosmically reuniting the cashmere chorus of this lilac love" evoke the idea of a deep, almost cosmic connection. The recurring celestial imagery underscores the timeless and boundless nature of your love... Your poem is a lush, emotive, and stylistically rich piece that explores the transformative and transcendent power of love through vivid imagery and I think it will do well in the contest.
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Date: 5/20/2024 4:45:00 AM
You painted your canvas brilliantly, my friend. Splendid alliteration showcasing in realms of love.--Tonight I seek the amorous amethysts adorning alluring alliterations upon my lyrical lips, sprinkling me with daisy dunes--- Chaos became a motionless momentum, merely magnified within magical melodies---Excellent as always, Ink.
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Date: 5/20/2024 1:56:00 AM
Wow! Outstanding work, sure to place high, IE:)
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Date: 5/19/2024 5:24:00 PM
Outstanding alliterative poem...was captivating with its imagery and certainly a contest winner in my book. Best wishes with the contest, hugs, Sara
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Date: 5/19/2024 1:24:00 PM
Dearest Empress, You have created a breathtaking menagerie, transporting me to a realm where love transcends boundaries. Each verse ignites the senses with beautiful descriptions. From "shimmering champagne armor" to "twinkling teal topaz," your words are exquisite pictures. I love how your metaphors dance like brushstrokes, creating a captivating masterpiece. Your amazing poetry artistically develops a sacred bond, bound by "wildflower wishes" and "tainted truth." I also loved how souls seem to entwine in "inescapable entanglement," harmonizing in "hibiscus harmony." Your words wonderfully guide us through the darkness, showing love is eternal. Empress, your masterpiece is a testament to boundless creativity and love's depths. An eternal gift, cherished forever. A FAV and A FAV! - Blessings my dear friend!! - Daniel
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Date: 5/25/2024 7:48:00 AM
Your comments are so supportive thank you so much for the fave too. I appreciate your kindness .., truly
Date: 5/19/2024 1:19:00 PM
your poetry of wondrous wonder satisfies the silent silhouette that sits and listens to each flourishing flame that dances from your poetic soul, Dear Poet
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/25/2024 7:49:00 AM
This comment actually made me smile hah thank you for understanding my poem
Date: 5/19/2024 12:52:00 PM
Oooooo child these amazing abundance of alliterations!!!! I am in love with how this piece flow .., sooo many lines that I love … you willfully whispered wildflower wishes to my wounded senses, sepia skies above sleepless seas, ferrying sapphire soliloquies. seek the amorous amethysts adorning alluring alliterations upon my lyrical lips,.. I mean child!! wrinkled winter now feels like summer… The kind of beauty u bring in your pieces r addictive!! Ooo that ending!!! crystalline canvas for a trillion springs more. Absolute perfection
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Date: 5/19/2024 1:53:00 PM
It’s on papi.. bleeding a lot is a good as bleed little bit aee … do not underestimate a little bleeding… it take little blood to make alot… hahahah ok I think I might have gone a lil off topic..but I believe in it aeee
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/19/2024 1:05:00 PM
Awwn u too kind papi! I bled too much! Tomsz will cringe probably lol
Date: 5/19/2024 12:39:00 PM
So many alliteration … so goood … always a masterpiece .
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Ink Empress
Date: 5/19/2024 1:05:00 PM
Thank you dahlin u are too sweet

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