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Your eyes close ... mine, stay open ... bewitched. My lips move soft along your cheek - a sublime dermal journey from nape to mouth ... I brush yours with mine, as if miming a sigh, and they part ... slowly ... sweetly. I pull back, slightly, then press again, tender, our lips ... fit, perfectly, (the way my fingers fill the spaces in yours - the way our bodies merge, like buttery heaven). Tongues, touch and dance ... twisting, loving, playing ... exploring. I taste, then tickle your teeth, running my tip along their clean smoothness, as a stick atop a white picket fence, (or fingers across piano keys), seeking every corner ... every flavor. I savor each delectable nuance that your pretty cheeks hide - the wonderment of saucy spices guarded by that dazzled smile ... for me alone. Craving, you share the tang of mine - remnants of your nectar still clinging like honey. All mixes and swirls with our sugary tongues - a delicious delight, a few stray strands of your platinum herbal tresses, caught between. Relenting to my fantasies and the electric sensations that flood my core, our mouths devouring, hot, my eyes finally close ... and I plunge your depths ... Lost ... in you ... in our HUNGER. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice (21) Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Strand Pick F, Any Theme, Any Form" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Love Is The Answer" Poetry Contest, Lu Loo, Judge & Sponsor. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Completely Your Choice 21, Any Form, Any Theme" Poetry Contest, Brian Strand, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 10/6/2020 9:46:00 AM
Sensational!!!!
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Date: 10/6/2020 1:27:00 AM
Mesmerizing, sublime piece, dear Greg:-) It left me craving for more! Heartiest congratulations on your win, sir. Faved.
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Date: 11/20/2019 11:47:00 AM
I was the first to comment on this sensual offering, I was right to see this on the contest mountaintop, congrats G on another top win!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 12:02:00 AM
Many kind thanks to you, my good friend - you were right about this one, and I'm glad you were! Blessings, Brother! :o)
Date: 11/20/2019 7:32:00 AM
amazing poem dear Gregory :) I am never surprised to see you at the top- beautifully expressed...thank you for your participation and congratulations on your placement. x:-)-luloo
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 12:01:00 AM
Thank you VERY much, Lu Loo - I greatly appreciate the placement, and I'm so happy you liked my poem! :o) <3
Date: 11/19/2019 10:36:00 PM
congrats on your win Gregory
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 12:00:00 AM
Many kind thanks, Gregory! :o)
Date: 11/19/2019 6:45:00 PM
Amazing imagery!! Congratulations on your win :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 12:00:00 AM
That's so kind of you, Heather - thank you very much! :o) <3
Date: 11/19/2019 6:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win Greg :)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/9/2019 12:00:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Sandra :o) <3
Date: 11/19/2019 4:16:00 PM
Gregory congratulations on your win!;)
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 11:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Brenda!
Date: 10/20/2019 5:17:00 PM
I agree with John...sensual overdrive! Pulling at my collar...lol...oh my
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 11:59:00 PM
Ha! Thank you, Kim - I'm so pleased you liked it, my friend - that was the intended reaction, lol. Blessings, Friend! :o) <3
Date: 10/20/2019 2:18:00 PM
Ok now you've really done it...sensual overload detected...run for your lives!!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 12/8/2019 11:58:00 PM
LOL - Thanks so much, John, I take this as a compliment, Bud! Blessings! :o)

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