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Ambiguous Love

I danced around the circle how graceless i am The tones i used to sing was no longer mine Food id like to eat turned bitter in time I looked at the mirror the face is not mine How cruel the world so clueless no sign Pieces by pieces will i ever redesign I feign day by day that everything is fine Love i once held was now undefined The tramp, loafer, bummer all in one Whatever you call the name is one sound Pond of lust and laughter and fun You may win the game but your cloud has no sun My eyes are bleeding in pain and on fire Indomitable anger so hard to respire Look at me now how you made me desire Exhausted, berated, Please condole by my side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/21/2016 8:56:00 PM
Cecilia, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/9/2013 5:48:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Cecilia. Love by any means, by any situation, deeply expressed. Great piece! enjoyable overall. Check out some of mine. Peace.
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Date: 12/9/2013 10:18:00 AM
Cecilia, this was impressive. "Your cloud has no sun"...incredible. Nice to meet you!
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Date: 12/9/2013 4:06:00 AM
- A beautiful and touching poem Cecilia ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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