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Amber

AMBER Amber described her. High yellow like the sun itself With a inside orange like a Fresh lit fire. Eyes so intriguing, heart so fatiguing From critiquing men, That weakened her. Men that weekend her when she deserved All the days on the calendar. So beautiful she once was With a smile that could brighten up The stormiest day And a mind which was once used, Now abused and confused. Her heart of gold was sold To the lowest bid, and the old pains is hard to rid. That cut on her left chest Is still open after so long, it just wants to heal. Constant pain that trembles up her spine From constantly bending over backwards To satisfy people. Now that fresh lit fire inside her Continues burning. That door that stands inside her heart Is no longer turning. Those eyes that was intriguing Is now reeking of bad vibes, That smile she once had decided to hide. She raised her pride, it lowered her cries Now she only cries inside. But, that is Amber. Amber is who I’ve described.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/26/2015 3:11:00 PM
PS, thank you for the kind reply on my comment below ...PD
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Date: 4/26/2015 2:55:00 PM
Corenne, Dropped by to say hi and congratulate you on having your poem selected by Soup's Administration. This is a wonderful poem to have featured on the homepage. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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Date: 4/26/2015 1:21:00 AM
Corenne, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 4/25/2015 11:26:00 PM
Thank you Corenne, for the reply on my comment. LINDA
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Date: 4/21/2015 10:23:00 PM
Corenne, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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Corenne Seale
Date: 4/25/2015 12:16:00 PM
Thank you for you warm welcoming xoxo
Date: 4/21/2015 1:47:00 PM
- Hello Corenne :) - I want to welcome you to the P-Soup - You have come to the right place, here you will find many talented poets :) - Share your work, try two get some "poets" friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Corenne Seale
Date: 4/25/2015 12:16:00 PM
Thank you for your warm welcoming Anne xoxo

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