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Wish I had seen Carnival:

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Rio de Janeiro, a city by the shore: Home to Ipanema, Carnival and dance folklore. As a child, of you I read, from books that showed your Christ. Arms outstretched, He guards your days and lights your sky by night. And now I’ve stood beneath His feet and breathed the air you breathe. I’ve viewed the famous Sugar Loaf, seen monkeys play in trees, visited your fruit stands and drunk from a coconut shell. I’ve searched for creatures hewn in stone that midnight vendors sell, and on your soft and clinging sand, I thrust my toes deep in and glistened under winter sun, brown sugar on my skin. Along Copacabana, I jumped waves, enjoyed a beach which, when they cross an avenue, all visitors can reach. On weekends and on holidays, your several sea fronts teem with hundreds, no with multitudes, of people who all seem content to chat beneath umbrellas, lounging in the sun, while on a road closed to all traffic, others like to run. And on that winding promenade are folks, most clad in shorts, thong-bikinied women, sundry shapes and shades all sorts! Kids whiz by on roller blades; old or young may ride a bike. Many simply merrily stroll, though dressed as for a hike. And in your city’s whole, the countless cars and bodies stream; pedestrians and door-less shops, props in your waking dream. with taxis veering left and right and people catching buses; Cacophony of life your subways and your streets encompass. Children on their mother’s hands; boys in soccer shirts. Men sip beers at sidewalk bars; girls scurry in their tight skirts. Portuguese artisans laid the paths your people walk. What tales immersed in history if cobblestones could talk! More than a metropolis, you are yourself, unique! And I have had the pleasure to have sampled your mystique. For Bic Gi-Sa's Landscape and Towns Contest

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Date: 4/15/2018 2:16:00 PM
Awesome tribute to a larger than life city, Andrea.
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Date: 7/26/2017 2:57:00 PM
Beautiful. I know my father-in-law adored the place. Great poem. I'm ready to go there today.
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Date: 7/25/2017 9:21:00 PM
Congrats on your first place win.
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Date: 7/25/2017 7:24:00 PM
A wonderful trip you led us on, congratulations Andrea, well deserved...
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Date: 7/25/2017 7:23:00 PM
Congratulation on your win, great imagery ~*
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Date: 7/25/2017 6:27:00 PM
I want to get on a plane right now Andrea many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/25/2017 6:55:00 PM
Thanks, Jan, this is rhymed version of what I wrote for Debs!! I'm so glad I won in the contests.
Date: 11/3/2014 10:06:00 PM
Stunning and what a complex tapestry you had to weave.
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Date: 9/4/2013 10:48:00 PM
What a marvelous poem. What a beautiful picture you have painted with words. And what a tribute to an amazing tribute to Rio. Bravo!
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Date: 1/5/2013 12:10:00 AM
your poem is amazing... love..pd
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Date: 2/3/2011 11:49:00 AM
Wonderful!Gotta go gotta go!
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Date: 5/21/2010 5:40:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea on your win in the contest "Viva Vacation" sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:06:00 PM
Congratulations my friend, this is a marvelous picture you paint here. well deserved win...cheers Margaret
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Date: 5/6/2010 8:29:00 PM
I knew this was a good one when I first read it. Seems LMB thought so, too. Congrats and good job.
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:34:00 PM
Andrea, congrats on your win. Outstanding script. It's one of the places in the world I would like to visit, however no luck so far. Have a good weekend - xxx Ralph
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:34:00 PM
Yahoo!!!!! Look who's won!! I'm not surprised after reading this wonderful poem about Rio!! A great poem, about a wonderful place...how wonderful for you to have been there, such a great memory, I'm sure!! Congratulations!!
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place,. You are really reaping the honors. This is a wonderful poem and makes me want to visit Amazing Rio. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/6/2010 5:11:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your 1st place win in my Viva Vacation contest .. a well written poem fitting the exact criteria.. thankxxx for supporting my contest.. luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/29/2010 7:05:00 PM
You sure had a great time . I envy you the experience, but as I read this I was there, I could feel all the hustle and the mystique you talk about. The mark of a great story teller....good one...Margaret
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Date: 4/24/2010 5:50:00 PM
Well done. If the thong-bikinied women and girls in tight skirts wasn't enough to entice me - all of the other visions in you words certainly did the trick.
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:40:00 AM
Thanks for taking us on this trip. You make Rio sound like old-home-fun. I've always been leery of South America, and without foundation. Love, Dave
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Date: 4/24/2010 10:32:00 AM
This is top shelf. I may not put one in with that kind of competition. If you check back you will see that I took your objection off. Sometimes my idiot box jumps open and all kinds of thinks(sic) jump out. Love your work - Charles
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Date: 4/24/2010 6:41:00 AM
I'm buying a ticket.....!! You have made it sound like a vacation paradise !!!! How could I follow this wonderful poem?? Great work, Andrea!!!
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