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Future dreams- I have put on hold because of dreadful fear, Until now, I am trapped in a cemetery with the dead, weeping; To myself so often, I say just let it go, let the pain go-follow dreams. Until now, my yesterdays were more important than tomorrows, Ravaged has been my short life and my future out of sight; Ends of journeys usually mean beginnings of others- but I am stuck. I have had a dark past, full of death and tragedy. And I am unable to let it go. And what is odd is that my parents were the happiest people, never full of gloom. Why cannot I be more like them? They were always looking to the future, they had plans and dreams, and they never dwelled in the past. They could have, but did not. My Dad used to say that life is like chapters in a book, you finish one, begin another. I know that it will be impossible to live my dreams until I accept the sad of my past. Accepting the past will allow me to move into the future. Yesterday is history and tomorrow is a mystery, as the saying goes. I want to make new memories, happy ones, but first I must find the happiness that dwells within. And move on because I have beautiful dreams full of peace and tranquility and awesome new adventures. I will take the past lessons and bring them with me- amazing are my dreams _______________________ Written May 7, 2016 Poetry/Acrostic/Haibun/Senyru/"Amazing Are My Dreams" Copyright Protected, ID 16- 787-517-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, First Place Only II sponsor, Laura Loo (June 18, 2016) Second Place ________________________ Written for the contest, Future sponsor, Nayda Ivette Negron First Place (Judged 5/11/2016) ________________________ Poem of the Day, May 9, 2016

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Date: 6/21/2016 12:48:00 PM
A 7 for this moving piece. Congrats on your win, Constance! Janice
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Date: 6/19/2016 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your second place win with this awesome poem! 7 ; )
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Date: 6/19/2016 5:51:00 PM
Broken Wings, a beautiful three-form style poem, I loved it the first time I read it, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/13/2016 9:38:00 AM
Beautiful write Constance, as always you share meaningful words in such a delicate way. The present is a wonderful place but the future is even better, when we concentrate on the hope, bitterness and sadness fades. Congrats on POTD
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Date: 5/13/2016 2:42:00 AM
Hello, Broken, congrats on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2016 1:00:00 PM
Congratulations broken,the future waits!
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Date: 5/12/2016 10:51:00 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings...
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Date: 5/12/2016 1:16:00 AM
Good luck on all of those new adventures and congrats on another f
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Date: 5/11/2016 8:09:00 PM
Broken Wings, congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/11/2016 1:38:00 PM
Hi Broken Wings, back again to congratulate you on your First Place win in the 'Future' contest. 7 Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/11/2016 1:27:00 PM
Broken Wings, yet another beautiful write, congrats on top win! :)-luloo
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Date: 5/11/2016 1:21:00 PM
Congratulations Constance on the placement of the contest
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Date: 5/10/2016 6:08:00 AM
Beautifully written BW.
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your Poem of The Day BW:)
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Date: 5/10/2016 12:42:00 AM
Don't be the prisoner of your past, but the architect of your future. Pray your dreams come true.. Congrats on POTD, Broken Wings
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Date: 5/9/2016 10:58:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! Enjoyed reading it! ~Cindi~
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Date: 5/9/2016 4:42:00 PM
So emotionally and beautifully written, Broken Wings. There is much optimism in your words, so the desire to move is there, and I hope you will find the happiness you so deserve. Congratulations on your poem chosen as Poem of the Day. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/9/2016 2:58:00 PM
....and most definitely congratulations on this Poem Of The Day!
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Date: 5/9/2016 2:56:00 PM
Yes the past is the past, but you write from such a beautiful heart and express things that some wouldn't know where to begin in doing so! Write...Write...Write...To the Light!...To the Light!...To the Light!!!...."Amazing are your writes!" :-)
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Date: 5/9/2016 9:25:00 AM
...feeling stuck in sadness is painful...but insight and wisdom will take root. Decorate your soul with all the love and beauty of life and look forward... Congrats on POTD!
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Date: 5/9/2016 8:05:00 AM
I hope you find the happiness you so deserve - remember your loved ones are angels watching over you:-) congrats on POTD and good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/9/2016 7:30:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d. dear B.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/9/2016 6:48:00 AM
Congratulations B/W for POTD honors, and best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 5/9/2016 4:16:00 AM
Poignant and heart touching:)
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Date: 5/8/2016 1:08:00 PM
A nice write Broken, my dreams vary so much and there is no rhyme or reason; they seem so real at times, sometimes exhausting. Good Luck for the contest :)
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