Amateur
Poorly written words
are etched onto a raggedy
sheet of paper.
They form into an ugly paragraph
unable to be deciphered
by anyone older than five.
Finished up and turned in
to the teacher
where she smiles and honors it.
Injected confidence swells inside
an amateur mind
Plastic thoughts
Forming in the brain.
Positive thoughts of riches and fame
Childish dreams, impossible goals.
The smog of thought clouds
the mind, makes it blind to the errors
the writing is made of.
Said writing is submitted to clearer eyes.
They judge with brute force
Stern frowns scarred on their lips.
Rejection comes in a heart beat.
Copyright © Shanda Braxton | Year Posted 2015
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