Amagic Rose

A beautiful magic rose hypnotized my eyes I can't move them or close... Among the flowers so far I'm smelling it now but i want its nectar.. It's harder little bit to reach my magic rose than to observe it... I dream to have just two wings and i know most of people are dreaming to be kings... I wish i were a bee I can fly to my rose that's all what i hope to be... Stay in its heart and live there leave all for one day or eternity , i don't care ...

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 12:16:00 AM

enjoying this a second time. LINDA

Seun Ogedengbe

Date: 11/26/2013 2:33:00 AM

Welcome to Poetrysoup. Keep up the poetic writing

Skat A

Date: 11/24/2013 12:08:00 AM

Kadi, , , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Kadi Amine
Date: 11/24/2013 8:05:00 AM

Hi ,Skat .I'm really happy to be one of your friends and among this nice community .Well...I'm a man from Algeria ..I teach french and I love english language ...I've been writting poems since i was 10..Now I'm 49years..I'm Married with 4 children ..I'm here to learn and I hope to find what i'm searching ..lol...Take care Mrs Kat .

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/23/2013 1:42:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Kadi ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Kadi Amine
Date: 11/24/2013 8:12:00 AM

Hi,Anne ! thanks for reading my poem. I have to read the others' ones I know ,inorder to get a large knowledge about how select the sweetable words for a better poem ...Take care Mrs Anne ...Hope see you here !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2013 1:34:00 PM

Kadi, ., I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kadi Amine
Date: 11/24/2013 8:20:00 AM

Hi,Linda !I'm really happy to appreciate my first contact with you....Mean your poetic community lol... Of course I will visit your contest and I hope learning more and more ...Take care Mrs Linda !