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Am I Legal

Am I legal? The law announced yesterday, That being me is illegal. For every passing day, The malady becomes more lethal. I didn’t want this, If I got to pick, I try every remedy, every trick, But each coming morning I am more virulent, more sick. They call me an atheist, An abomination to any deity. But I believe in god, The immortal, the almighty. But I am yet to find a religion in this world, that accepts my being. That gives me love, for which I’ve been praying. I have concealed myself so long, I could use some fraying. And for the lack of courage or shame, I choose to remain censored. Till someone could comprehend, Am I legal?; a question unanswered.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/19/2016 10:43:00 PM

ame, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/1/2016 11:12:00 AM

:) skat

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 3:27:00 PM

AME, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

Kenisha Shines

Date: 7/22/2015 10:01:00 AM

Welcome to P-Soup.good wrote.have a great day.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/18/2015 5:51:00 AM

- With smiles and joy I welcome you to P-Soup, Ame :) - Hope you will find this poem page interesting and post many more poems in the future - Have a great experience together here with us in "the poems world" - I wish you every success - // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 11:24:00 PM

Ame, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Ame Val
Date: 7/16/2015 5:59:00 AM

Ty soo much!!!

Skat A

Date: 7/15/2015 9:07:00 PM

Hi Amy, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Ame Val
Date: 7/16/2015 6:02:00 AM

ty soo much !!! The name I/'ve put is Ame It's actually a kinda anagram for my real name(which Ido not wish to reveal) I'm a 22 yr old guy Ty soo much for the appreciation. look forward for further conversations

Jan Allison

Date: 7/15/2015 5:22:00 PM

a powerful write on gender - you are who you are and should be accepted as such - stay strong:-) hugs Jan xx

Ame Val
Date: 7/16/2015 6:06:00 AM

Thank you! If only more ppl were like you!! I'm not against homophobes, I think everyone has a right to have opinions and express them. But hating someone for such a frugal thing is so sad! And to top it, THE LAW of any country SHOULD NOT BE BASED ON HATE!!!