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Am I Dreaming

Beguiled by her delicate beauty Mesmerized by her charm. Her soft flowing hair like spun gold, as she danced in the summer sun, As graceful as a floating feather. Brighter than a diamond, the sparkle in her eye, her smile set my heart on fire, Her voice as melodious as a symphony, She remodeled my style and changed my looks , Turned me into something she chose me to be, And incredibly decided that I suited her perfectly. Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Contest Name : Pick a Title Contest Vol 35 Theme : Repristination March 2023

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I Am Anaya

Date: 2/21/2024 5:48:00 PM

She is most deserving, Merv. Your poem certainly appealed to me, lucky man! I Am Anaya

Merv Hold
Date: 2/25/2024 3:46:00 AM

Thank you Anaya. That was a long time ago. She is tubbier now and does not float like a feather any more. She still appeals to me. I like that phrase you used "most deserving".

Charity Johnson

Date: 3/4/2023 4:05:00 AM

Beautiful poem :)

Charity Johnson
Date: 3/12/2023 3:15:00 AM

your welcome :)

Merv Hold
Date: 3/10/2023 11:49:00 AM

Charity, I really appreciate having a lady comment on this poem. It gives me assurance that I wrote it in a way that it appeals to both Ladies and men. Thank you.

Terry Ireland

Date: 2/26/2023 5:40:00 PM

Good start to Souper life. Carry on mate

Merv Hold
Date: 2/27/2023 5:14:00 AM

This one I wrote a fair while ago. It was actually to get back in her good books when I forgot to pick her up from a function she attended. Wow was she mad. She is no push over, Took a bacon and eggs dinner (thats about all I can cook) and several cups of tea and bickies over the next few days to be completely forgiven.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/26/2023 5:05:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Merv:-) I enjoyed reading it. Welcome to Poetrysoup, my friend.

Merv Hold
Date: 2/27/2023 4:35:00 AM

Edward, pleasures all mine. Thank you for your kind words. As you probably guessed its about my wife. She's a peach, and puts up with me, she is the lady I met when my luck was heading fair and someone upstairs decided we should be a pair.