Always You and I:

We have always been, Together we shall live on, We live forever. /|\

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Kay Roberts

Date: 10/25/2016 7:57:00 AM

Simple words Powerful message. Love it.

White Wolf
Date: 10/25/2016 8:13:00 AM

Thanks Kay, just experimenting with a few different forms, I think I like the sonnet thus far the most, but then again, they all hold certain qualities don't they. I never knew there was so many different forms until I came to the Soup. /|\

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/11/2016 11:31:00 PM

I really like this one's message. YEs, you gotta do a limerick with no e's in it. It will probably fill up sometime tomorrow. So get on it now. My frog is not the funniest limerick. But it's kind of limiting!! go back and see my frog pictures!!

White Wolf
Date: 10/11/2016 11:42:00 PM

OK I will Thanks Andrea /|\

Morgen Farmer

Date: 10/11/2016 2:39:00 AM

Hey Rick, well written haiku. Love is enlightening.

White Wolf
Date: 10/11/2016 2:43:00 AM

Thanks Morgen, it sure is! I may be single but I still have love in my heart, and see it all around. /|\