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I slowly awake to a place that seems out of this world where nothing clicks or matches with anything familiar I find myself walking on clouds while above me trees grow upside down along with grasses and flowering plants I looked around finding that animals were keeping me company grazing on clouds or just floating long sides there were birds singing sweetly So peaceful, no jarring sounds it seemed I was inside looking out perhaps I had woken up in paradise

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Date: 2/3/2024 4:53:00 PM
I truly enjoyed your smooth flowing words that were peaceful at every turn. Walking on clouds in your dream must've felt heavenly. I think you were in paradise...your subconscious took you to a pain free place...how incredible. Hope you're doing okay, dear Shadow. Thinking of you, hugs, Sara
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/3/2024 6:26:00 PM
Hi Sara I am truly blessed by my wonderful friends on here if only I could bottle you for the not so good days i was inspired by your haiku to write my new poem I hope it comes close to yours. He works in mystique ways hugs Shadow
Date: 2/3/2024 10:38:00 AM
Hey my friend, I hope you are ok.. poem beautifully transports the reader to a realm of enchantment and wonder, where the boundaries of reality blur and the imagination takes flight. The vivid imagery of walking on clouds, trees growing upside down, and animals grazing amidst floating clouds paints a surreal picture of a place beyond the constraints of the familiar. The tranquil atmosphere, punctuated by the sweet melodies of singing birds, evokes a sense of peace and serenity
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Date: 2/3/2024 12:21:00 PM
Ty SO was not sure I had hit it right so glad you liked it Health well another day another way pain can be unbearable case of gritting my teeth and riding it out thats life lol hugs Shadow

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