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Alphabet Soup

I feel like an expired crouton when not penning On a soup bowl where spoons are all reeling They would scribble like steam and taste what is read Through minutes and hours, still they are not enough fed As overnight alphabets brew from dandy stewing Soup bowl has spices, purees and great presentation And finest herbs with glories extract dollars and a donation, The best sauce boils till TPS chef rams into a bodge glitch There’s a fly on soup, error shuts down from techno ditch Curdling word-ingredients; spoons like me burn in frustration! © . . .. . David William’s Life Without Soup By nette onclaud

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 8:57:00 PM
Hard to resist a bowl of soup like this one Nette; is it safe to eat? Ha ha! This creation should tickle David's tast buds, Best of luck!
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Date: 2/6/2012 5:38:00 PM
How creative and original this is, Nette. I enjoyed it muchly!!!
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:09:00 AM
Very good poem on the contest theme.A soupmail is on the way......
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Date: 2/5/2012 4:49:00 AM
Choice Flow Poetess. I love the Soup Bowl TerminologY!~~~PeAce love, and Chicken Grease doves...(whatthee hellever that means:)!~
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Date: 2/4/2012 5:40:00 PM
Great one..That expired crouton made it a winner..Enjoyed the work..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
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Date: 2/4/2012 5:18:00 PM
Impressive write here Nette. You have just made David's decision making more difficult.
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Date: 2/4/2012 2:03:00 PM
written so vividly for us all Nette luv.. we are rather lost if not able to be on PS .. at least once a day.. lovely entry with strong sentiments of expression.. much success sweets..
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