Aloof

Disdainful moon, Scrutinized my happiness And unparalleled delight Delight that she once felt Towards her only light Light that made her beautiful And displayed her unrivaled might Might that gradually fading Because of her shattered pieces heart Heart that caused her to be secluded, Torn asunder, and apart Apart that will no longer be together And be like exquisite finest art Art that appreciates beauty Of the lost and isolated Disdainful moon

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Skat A

Date: 4/15/2015 6:32:00 PM

JAY, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jay-Ar Arpon
Date: 4/16/2015 12:55:00 AM

My pleasure to be your friend, thank you for the kind words, I will tell you after this week kind of busy with my college life.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/11/2015 9:57:00 PM

Thank you for the nice reply

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2015 8:34:00 PM

Jay-ar Arpon, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Jay-Ar Arpon
Date: 4/10/2015 11:05:00 PM

I will Linda, Thanks for the warm welcome

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2015 4:29:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Jay - Welcome to P-Soup :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Jay-Ar Arpon
Date: 4/9/2015 9:36:00 AM

thank you very much for the appreciation..