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Along the Walkway

Along the walkway somewhere lilacs scent And visions of grandeur waft betwixt my head A “Hmm” after each new-ward notion, then Like thistles, keep slipping through the cracks of zen Why Campanula ringing out Disturbed by the sounds unrenounced Then I stop again, in an “ah ha!” revelation Followed by the “No wait, that's not quite it” aggravation When from on high, a mighty oak hits me on the acorn “Oooh” suddenly things seem clearer more and more And looking down I can't ignore the facts Of my "that's it" underwear and my "oh no!" pants

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/6/2012 11:25:00 AM
Now could it be that the scent in the first verse has anything to do with the underwear in the last? Don't know whether to laugh or cry but best to just enjoy the fun twist I find in your verse! :)
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Date: 4/6/2012 12:24:00 AM
HAHA! This was a grrrrrrrrrrrrreat one and so interestingly worded. You had me hooked to the very end - an ideal read tonight. Keep it up! Always, Laura
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