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Along Our Path

We laughed and loved along our path by and by. And felt extraordinary; two hearts entwined. The faintest scent of lavender embraced us. Distantly, gardenias decorated, white. A quiet interlude impassioned delight. And our thoughts within the wind lightly soared. As in times before, we knew love’s quiet peace. The day thus started vanquished every sadness. Our wildest dreams of joyfulness found birth. And you, as every part of me, prayed to kiss. There, beside the wall, beneath the eyes of God. © February 7, 2011 Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen Posted for Poetry Soup Member Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 6/20/2013 6:04:00 AM
Okies this one is good for Daily Love, just move it into present tense . L & L
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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Date: 7/26/2013 7:06:00 AM
Is this the one you mean, Debbie? http://heypublisher.com/publishers/daily-love The page it took me to said...Not Accepting Submissions.
Date: 2/9/2012 11:46:00 PM
Beautiful love story! Congrats on your win!! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/7/2012 10:05:00 PM
Beautiful lines Dane Ann. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/7/2012 5:12:00 PM
Congratulations on a great write and a terrific win. Jon
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Date: 2/7/2012 4:56:00 AM
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Date: 2/7/2012 4:55:00 AM
What a beautiful treasure,,thanks for sharing my dear dany..hugs -C.C :)
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Date: 2/7/2012 4:50:00 AM
Beautiful combination of Love nature and God. Nice job
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