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Alone bleak no color in my heart sad hidden behind doors still exposed to all the cruelty of the wind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/26/2019 11:00:00 PM
Beautiful verse, Arthur, lonely but still exposed to the outside world
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Date: 3/6/2019 9:52:00 AM
Late Congrats!!! on your POTD!! Arthur...cool little gem...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 3/6/2019 2:19:00 AM
Hi Arthur, Great job! Congratulations on getting the poem of day:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/5/2019 11:00:00 PM
The cruelty and secretive nature of life is endless.... Congratulations Alone Z, on your POTD.
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Date: 3/5/2019 7:19:00 PM
OO! This is good! Love 'still exposed to all the cruelty of the wind'. Loneliness IS kind of an exposed feeling! Congratulations on your poem being selected POTD!
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Date: 3/5/2019 7:14:00 PM
The photo is heartbreaking. Your thoughts touch me deeply. No one should ever feel this way. Congratulations Arthur, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/5/2019 5:31:00 PM
The metaphor in this poem astounds Arthur. Congratulations on having this brilliant poem honored with POTD! : )
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Date: 3/5/2019 2:04:00 PM
Alone is not a very good place to be my friend. Congratulations on poem of the day.
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Date: 3/5/2019 1:55:00 PM
An amazing poem Arthur, creative and expressive! Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 3/5/2019 11:28:00 AM
Excellent, my friend, congratulations for POTD honors...
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Date: 3/5/2019 9:26:00 AM
How unusual! How true! Congratulations! P.S I didn't get the picture on the POTD page and went to your own page! I don't know how to express what I feel from that picture!
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Date: 3/5/2019 9:07:00 AM
Very emotive, and expressed with very effective restraint. Well done on a worthy POTD, Arthur.
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Date: 3/5/2019 8:10:00 AM
This is awesome, Arthur. Congratulations on being awarded POTD. Well-deserved. Charlie
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Date: 3/5/2019 7:47:00 AM
Potent powerful little poem. Perfect. Congrats on POTD my friend, xomo
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Date: 3/5/2019 7:06:00 AM
Ok so I didn't get POTD (joke) but am so so so delighted this write has been honoured:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/5/2019 6:52:00 AM
Congrats on poem of the day, Arthur.
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Date: 3/5/2019 6:19:00 AM
Congrats on POTD Arthur
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:59:00 AM
- Awesome - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2019 3:42:00 AM
Powerful verse Arthur, congrats on POTD. Tom.
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Date: 3/4/2019 3:02:00 PM
A sad and powerful write Arthur...
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Date: 3/4/2019 12:46:00 PM
If only there were "doors" that could protect us from every type of win, Arthur. Profound message here. Great writing! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 3/4/2019 12:43:00 PM
when will we ever be safe?...a bold write reminding us to honor man's dignity... huggs
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Date: 3/4/2019 7:08:00 AM
Striking and expressive words....poem and accompanying picture a faithful reflection of one another. Regards // paul
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Date: 3/4/2019 1:59:00 AM
now that is so powerful so sad Art, adding this gem to my faves - its real poetry:-) hugs Jan xx
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