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Alone Yet Crowded

I walk through this world alone, Yet it's still so crowded. All around people wander. To them, I am the air they breathe. I cannot be seen, but I keep them living. I walk among them silently. Speaking would break their trance, They would see the truth. Their eyes scan the area around, I am in their vision radius, yet I cannot be seen. I have done enough to keep them from seeing me. They may look in my direction, but never long enough to see me. This is the minimum amount I can do. They are all interfering with peace. Killing, arson, thieving, arguing. These are all signs of evil, Evil which I avoid. To bring myself down to their level, The thought in general is against what I stand for. I am alone to live life how I want, To thrive in knowledge and experience. They thrive in evil and sin. This is the disease in our world. I stay away for my well-being. I can never have what I don't accept, Instead I choose to live healthy and in peace. This is how my world works. A world where I thrive and they sink, Where I live and they die, Where I bless and they sin, Where they crowd and I alone, Live to seek out a cure for this world's disease. I live alone in this world, Yet it's still so crowded.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 12:35:00 PM
Hi Marek, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/7/2016 11:31:00 AM
Marek,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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