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Alone Without You

Without you my nights have no meaning. Without you, it’s hard to smile. So, I wait here alone and without you Till we’re together again for a while. Only sadness, in being without you, Is the feeling I know here alone. If you could only be with me, To a diamond, I’d change from a stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/18/2013 3:33:00 PM
This is a very touching, heartfelt, and sorrowful poem, Jake. And, it is surely one that I can relate to. Great writing, as always!..This is very similar to a poem that I have just finished writing with Isaiah Zerbst, for the "Team Work" contest. It is based on a painting, "The Signal", by William Powell Frith. We will be posting it soon...Thank you so much for the great comments on "Frozen Raindrops"!
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Date: 12/2/2012 8:27:00 PM
Oh this is a lovely poem Jake....that last line 'To a diamond, I'd change from stone' lovely flow, lots of heart - Shaz
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Date: 11/12/2012 8:39:00 PM
Just as Doreen said, John...keep hope in your heart as tomorrow is a new day with new promises and surprises. Always, Annalise
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