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Alone With the Moon

vacant eyes glisten behind the.windowpane alone with the moon

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Thomas Martin

Date: 5/20/2015 12:10:00 PM

Admire this senryu! Finally a good one!

Tara Jennings

Date: 11/23/2014 10:21:00 PM

I love this... The moon is a centerpiece for the reflections we undergo alone at night, and the obsession of my own recollections. thank you for the beautiful work, as usual

Ingvar Thorisdottir

Date: 11/17/2014 11:36:00 AM

The burden and joy of reflection. I adore this work, xoxoxo.

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/15/2014 4:45:00 PM

Absolute gorgeous write as usual my dearest Charmaine! Warm loving hugs, Jack XXX

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/15/2014 12:08:00 AM

so beautiful. You really ought to be involved in a haiku club or website!! Are you?

David Mohn

Date: 11/14/2014 8:53:00 PM

this is terrific Charmaine...nicely written

Joseph May

Date: 11/14/2014 7:00:00 AM

lovely haiku Charmaine..enjoyed

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/13/2014 11:58:00 AM

beautifully painted charmaine golden pen

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 11/13/2014 11:24:00 AM

Wonderful.

Tim Smith

Date: 11/13/2014 4:07:00 AM

The stars are shining for you dear Charma.... Hugs Tim

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/12/2014 9:33:00 PM

Sometimes there is beauty in that too, Charma ;) thats just my 2 cents. Hope you are having a good week xx

David Meade

Date: 11/12/2014 8:42:00 PM

the vacant eyes are haunting -- no tears fall but pool before the blink . . . windowpane is two way -- looking out and up but also reflecting back to you . . . the moon keeping watch on you! take strength from the soft light . . . you are never totally alone.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/13/2014 2:48:00 AM

what a stunning perceptive comment David:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison

Date: 11/12/2014 8:14:00 PM

Such a feeling of intense loneliness and isolation Charmaine - hopefully tomorrow will be a brighter day:-) Hugs Jan x

Casarah Nance

Date: 11/12/2014 7:56:00 PM

we all see the same sky and still we feel alone. well said senryu, hugs xx

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 11/12/2014 8:05:00 PM

Tomorrow there will be the dunlight Cas..and maybe We all watch it together..Tnks for stopping by