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Alone Under the Rain

You stay alone and look at pouring rain, Your eyes in tears and you can’t hide your pain, You’ve lost your love; it drives you so insane, You see you waited for that special one in vain, You know the life won’t give you chance again. You’ve lost the fight, you couldn’t ever gain, It’s deep inside your mind, inside your brain, You feel the burning ache, you can’t explain, Love hurts so strong, and brings a lot of pain, And now your only friend is pouring rain. 28.05.2013 for "10 lines" contest

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Date: 9/12/2013 11:23:00 PM
wow..this one I love the most... I can't imagine feeling so lonely... perfect ending.... xox..Linda
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