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Alone In the Darkness

Polar caps melted ~ cobalt skies in mourning show ~~ A solitary ~ berg, drifting like a lost soul ~~ all alone in the darkness ~ http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-13.php

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Deb Radke

Date: 12/20/2010 11:52:00 PM

Oh, I like this one. I'm picking some of your poems at random, to read. This title struck me, as does this poem. It reminds of my 'Awake Hitting Icebergs'. The 'Titanic' also is here, most certainly in your words "solitary berg, drifting like a lost soul". Ah, very, very good line. Double intimation here? A hint of all the lost souls that soon would be drifting? In any case, very good.

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/22/2010 2:43:00 PM

Hello James, So well done, I love this even though the message is sad... As Always, Shar

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/24/2010 1:39:00 PM

And on that solitary berg you might see the last polar bear alive. Very sad commentary on our environment, but a beautiful tanka, James. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/24/2010 8:41:00 AM

Very nice pen picture of the darkness painted with good images, James

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/24/2010 8:18:00 AM

prophetic write , good one James

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/24/2010 7:16:00 AM

GREAT!!!! this is fantastic.....