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Below is the poem entitled ALONE IN THE CROWD which was written by poet Neldy Jolo. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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I am in the jeepney in the eve of 24
I have people around me yet I am alone
I am too emotional this time
Missing someone that I cannot be with
I want to cry with no tears in my eyes
Yet my heart is tearing deeply
I wanted to shout so loud "I love you" but I cannot in public
This is the feeling I have this time.
Oh God tell me to calm my feeling and ease it to dream
Tomorrow shall be my day
I love you God!

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  1. Date: 12/28/2012 4:26:00 PM
    excellent expression you have here xoxo pd