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Alone In Darkness

I walk Alone In darkness I can't see the ground Beneath my feet But there's more stars Than I've ever seen There's no one else To walk with now No other voice No other breath No sound But soft rustle Of grass Under me- It's all I Need At least Here I can breathe

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Date: 2/5/2014 9:10:00 PM
At least Here I can breathe We all want to be able to breath... that one safe space usually does the trick... Great piece Camron.
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Date: 2/5/2014 7:27:00 PM
"I can't see the ground Beneath my feet But there's more stars Than I've ever seen"-The same revelation I had after tormenting myself for over 3 years after my wife left me!-"PROFOUND"!-Love it!!!//Sinclair
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