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Alone I Walk

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I walk and walk and in my mind I walk toward something someone you I walk and walk in a motion I wish was soothing somehow it’s nowhere that I walk never getting closer I wonder how it is I’m walking riding life’s evermoving sidewalk going against the tide against the grain never getting closer static not getting anywhere and not getting further I’m left alone with my illusion of somehow getting closer AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on May 31, 2022 for contest A BRIAN STRAND PREMIERE CHOICE sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 5TH Originally posted on May 30, 2022

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 6/24/2022 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Your poem resonates the depth of sadness as you walk through life alone. :)Paulette

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/24/2022 1:28:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Paulette.

Robertina B.

Date: 6/23/2022 11:23:00 AM

I really enjoyed your creativity, Line.. It literally can take one to another level! Amazing write, dear friend.. This is going to my favs! Many blessings..

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/23/2022 6:21:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely comment adn for the fave, Robertina.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 6/21/2022 10:45:00 AM

A feeling of emptiness and sad realization, expressed with words. Beautifully written, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/21/2022 3:08:00 PM

Thank you very much, Sandra ~

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 6/18/2022 2:42:00 AM

An indescribable vacuum, so well described!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/18/2022 3:09:00 PM

Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment ~

Christopher Grieves

Date: 6/8/2022 2:16:00 AM

I love your vocal on this poem - so crisp and clear. I aspire to this. Do tell of your secret :-) hi-tech recording? .. and the poem itself just wonderful. Thank you!

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/8/2022 10:10:00 AM

Simple equipment. Will send you soupmail.

Jcb Brul

Date: 6/4/2022 1:08:00 AM

Very emotive! I understand the feeling of like walking and not getting anywhere..only make-believe. Congratulations! The recital is very much soothing though in melancholy. Blessings. A fav for me.

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/4/2022 8:26:00 AM

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, JCB.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/1/2022 1:25:00 PM

A heart needs its other half to feel whole. Blessings xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 6/1/2022 8:51:00 PM

Absolutely. Thanks, Connie ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/31/2022 3:57:00 PM

Excellent! I feel your angst, dear poet!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/31/2022 4:25:00 PM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Kim ~