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Alone For Too Long

The twist The creak The echo of footsteps The heartbeat Heavy The darkness The gripling fear The droplets of water One by One The noose suspended from the ceiling The chair beneath it The step The fall The gages The chokes The breath rushing out Then silence The suicide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/6/2010 3:38:00 AM
Horrible that someone would feel so isolated when there is a friend that careth more than a brother...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 4/4/2010 8:40:00 AM
The tension and anxiety that lead one to self destruct ring loud and clear in your words, Nasilele. I hope you find some uplifting moments to enjoy Easter Sunday. Best wishes, Carolyn
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