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Alone

tears racked face lines soaked with grief, a torrent of unabating pain ....saying ..goodbye to the love of my life ..my heart races? how can I face life alone, I love you. yet I must walk the path of loneliness until called home to your arms, my soulmate.
penned 31 July 2016 Contest - Three Stanzas- Three Only form used tetractys. 1.2.3.4.10.10.4.3.2.1.1.2.3.4.10

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Date: 8/2/2016 11:06:00 PM
n interesting and challenging form to convey so much in few words. Congrats Seren. Love Sunita
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Date: 7/31/2016 7:08:00 AM
Very emotional Seren...We all need faith when loosing a loved one. Excellent for the contest.
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Date: 7/31/2016 6:04:00 AM
Oh Seren this is a great entry for the contest and a lovely form where so few words say so much:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/31/2016 5:22:00 AM
Very touching tetractys ... beautiful ...
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Date: 7/31/2016 12:43:00 AM
You stole the words from my soul :)
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