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Alone

Scary Frightened Watchful Coldest Not even a single kid is here The room is black, no one is at home I stay so still, not daring to roam

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/19/2015 8:52:00 PM
Yes you are alone and do a wonderful job describing the feelings associated with it. Nice write Rachel
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Date: 10/19/2015 8:25:00 PM
You summed up the title pretty well, Rachel. I might only suggest that the first four lines be offset, only to not lead the reader to think that this is an acrostic. Great write, but I would try to make those first four words out of the context of the feelings you give so well below them.
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