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Alone

There I was sitting, left all alone All was grey, and I was all on my own I was grey inside as well, nothing new For me it is normal to be alone, I’m used to I was starting to wonder: “why is this happening to me?” But instead I wondered: “Why has it taken me long this time to be?!”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/23/2015 4:43:00 PM
i love this its so true and amzing
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/13/2015 5:45:00 AM
Thank you,Anastasia, so much for stopping by and glad you liked it :)
Date: 3/18/2015 12:01:00 AM
A pensive poem but expresses the lonely heart feel very well in rhyming poetic language. Thumbs up. Do pls coment my latest poem too.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/13/2015 5:46:00 AM
Thank you,Zaynub,so much for commenting :)
Date: 3/14/2015 8:07:00 PM
You expressed your poem mighty well, Mohamed... Luv SKAT
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 3/14/2015 8:40:00 PM
Thank you, Skat A, so much for stopping by and very glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 3/14/2015 3:16:00 PM
Hi Mohamed, great poem, you have expressed this sentiment so well!
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 3/14/2015 6:17:00 PM
Thank you, Arthur, so much for your kind words and constant support, i really appreciate your comment and opinion, and very happy you liked it :)

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