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Vaguely in the dark halls of remembrance I see you dance. It is with me forever an ache inside and will always be there. Dancing ....... on a high place ...... in a false land. In the dark trees you step high as you dance under a bright moon The step lives in me forever trapped in my head and will forever be there. Dancing ....... on a high place ...... in a false land.

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Date: 1/12/2014 11:00:00 AM
A beautifully written poem Paddi, And I see that you have a win too. Congrats.....hugs....Roger
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Date: 1/1/2014 2:01:00 PM
- A winning poem Paddi, congratulations!! - Touching and beautifully written - HAPPY NEW YEAR 2014!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/28/2013 6:58:00 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win,Paddi
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Date: 12/27/2013 1:48:00 AM
Hi Paddi, .. CONGRATULATIONS -thank you for supporting my contest. Wishing you the best when it comes to Health and Happiness, this coming New Year! xox..Linda
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Date: 12/13/2013 7:52:00 PM
Unusual creative writing. I really like this poem, Paddy. Best regards chuck
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